Final Curtain (Murder mystery with a twist)
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Last published Tue, Nov 4, 2025
Short story by A.J. Hamilton - One Part. Completed. Ten minute read.
Some swearing and minor sexual content - 15 years + recommended.
Gretchen is not exactly warm and fuzzy. She has been cast in a show and has been giving it her all in the role of "Flapper Girl". But she just hasn't bonded with the cast except for Rodney. The share a mutual disdain for the very lovely Celia - who seems to emanate warmth and beauty. She gets all the attention, flowers, adulation and she is dead for most of the play! She just lies there on the floor. "Acting". Neil the director thinks Celia is just the bees' knees. It isn't fair! And someone is going to pay.
Murder Mystery with a twist.
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