His beautiful death

Here's the thing, everybody will talk about what a great man he was, everybody will remember the life he lived and everybody will tell the story of his life. But nobody will tell the story of his death, and that's a shame because, it deserves to be told.

Hey there. Just a small story that I wrote, an essay for my Eng Class in fact. This is my first time publishing here, give it a shot please?
-L