The Fatal Day
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Rachel and her friends(Kelly,Elizabeth,and Courtney)had thought about taking a vacation but never really had the time. Then Courtney had the idea to go an a skydiving trip to Kalispell,Montana for a week. it was supposed to be the best week ever. Supposed to be are the key words. It all went downhill that fatal day.
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