The Fatal Day - Mackenzie Thornton - Wattpad

The Fatal Day

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Parts 9
Time 34m

Reads 130
Votes 9
Parts 9
Time 34m

Mature

Rachel and her friends(Kelly,Elizabeth,and Courtney)had thought about taking a vacation but never really had the time. Then Courtney had the idea to go an a skydiving trip to Kalispell,Montana for a week. it was supposed to be the best week ever. Supposed to be are the key words. It all went downhill that fatal day. 
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