The Cabin In Hell
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Tiffany’s POV
It was finally collage spring break, and i’m going camping with all my friends and my boyfriend John. John is packing our car with what we need. My friend Lola and her boyfriend Nathan. Also, John's friend Ben and his girlfriend Nina are coming. Finally, Owen is coming but he is dating anyone. As we are all done packing are cars and start the long drive to the cabin were staying in. The whole drive John was just talking about camping when he was a boy scout (which I did not care about). Finally when we got to the camp grounds I noticed most of the cabins were burnt to the ground or in really bad shape. When we go to the cabin an old woman was standing there. I stepped out the car and said “Are you the owner of Camp Chuckanucka.”
She said “Yes I am. Oh uh heres your key to the cabin. If you have any problems call me at 434-666-6897.”
I said “Thanks miss…”
She said “ Miss Pindu.” We all started to unload our stuff.
Then ben spoke up and said “We should have a grill out tonight. Maybe grill some pork and steak.”
Owen said “ Yeah! Good idea i’ll help you grill.”
Nathan said “I’ll drive to the store now to get some boozes.” Lola just rolled her eyes mainly because she doesn’t drink. Her brother died in a car accident. Later the events will unfold the will ruin the lives for many of us campers.
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