The Beacon in the light

I NEED HELP WITH FEEDBACK!!

These are drafts at the current moment and this whole book is a WIP.

In the not-so-distant future, a worldwide catastrophe has plunged the planet into darkness. A mysterious event has caused the sun to dim, enveloping the world in a perpetual twilight. Civilization is on the brink of collapse as the ecosystem crumbles, and humanity struggles to adapt to this new, bleak reality.

Amid this dystopian world, a group of survivors in a small, isolated community clings to the remnants of society. They have adapted to the constant darkness, developing their own rules and a fragile sense of security. However, they fear the creatures that emerge with the darkness - grotesque, light-sensitive monsters that hunt at night.

The story follows a young woman, Anya, who possesses a unique ability to harness and control the dim, scarce light that remains. Her power becomes a beacon of hope for her people as they believe she can lead them to salvation. But, Anya's gift also attracts the attention of a shadowy organization that seeks to exploit her abilities for their dark purposes.

As Anya's powers grow, she must decide whether to embrace her role as a saviour or defy the oppressive forces seeking to control her. With tension rising within her community and beyond, she embarks on a harrowing journey to unravel the mysteries of the "Eclipse Event" and confront the true source of the world's descent into darkness.

I would appreciate the comments very much!!