Love off script

Tiana Brown, a shy and introverted young black college student, has a secret crush on Ethan Hall - white star hockey player and campus heartthrob. After a chance encounter, Ethan discovers Tiana's beauty and kindness, but their social differences threaten to tear them apart.
As they navigate love, friendships, and family expectations, Tiana and Ethan must confront their own insecurities and fears. Will their love be strong enough to overcome obstacles and shine brighter than their differences?

Book Snippet:
Ethan collided with her, books flying everywhere.
"Oh no, I'm so clumsy!" He bent down to help.
Tiana's heart skipped beats as their hands touched.
"You're... Ethan Hall," she whispered.
He smiled. "And you are...?"
Tiana's Inner Monologue:
He's talking to me. Ethan Hall is talking. To me.
Ethan's Inner Monologue:
She's adorable. And shy. I like that.
How does this sound?