Tere bin- Episode 46/47 alternate continuation

This is how I wanted the story to go forward from the episode 46. Obviously MR is out of the picture. So, I have written the confrontation, the consummation and the aftermath of how it should all have happened according to me.
I think it was about time Meerab took charge and take a hold of the situation in the relationship actively and I needed a moment of breaking point for Murtasim's character without sullying him or making him beg infront of Meerab.
The last 5 min of the last episode also gave me an ick, Meerab still did not confess her love and just let him kneel infront of her and heard him say how he would be as she wanted. That was not love, that to me was complete annihilation of both their characters, and Meeerab who prized herself in her identity should not let the man she loves be ready to lose and sacrifice his.
So I am trying to fix these plotholes and tie the loose ends and still keep their characters intact.