Revelation
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Last published Sun, Jan 31, 2016
Hell. We've all heard of it, but what exactly is Hell? Is it real? Is it just a figment of our imagination? If it is real, do sinners of all sorts get in for even the smallest white lie? Or do only the serial killers and other various convicts get a first-class ticket to take a ride on the long roller-coaster to Hell? Eve is about to find out.
For my honors English class, we read "The Inferno", or "Dante's Inferno", and as a final project we had to create our own Hell and write an essay. I wrote it relating it all to Black Veil Brides, as well as a few friends, and it follows my own personal beliefs. This is not the essay I passed into my teacher. I rewrote the 23 page project into this.
I am a procrastinator, and I also just don't have much time, as I have a lot going on in my life. I will try to update as often as I can, but I either am full of muse for writing or have pure writer's block.
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