Blurred Minds
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Last published Wed, Jun 10, 2015
Aluna saw her walk out of that house the night of the murder. She knows it was Dr. Estrel who murdered the girl.
When she tries to investigate the murder, Aluna gets herself diagnosed as crazy and sent to the nearest sanctum. How can you accuse your doctor of murder without her covering it up by saying that you are crazy? No one believes anything Aluna says and agrees that she belongs in a mental hospital.
While there, Aluna knows she's not crazy and tries to prove it, but she soon grows accustom to the comfort of life secluded from everyone else. She believes that she is crazy herself, and that none of her life is real, that she is simply living off of a series of hallucinations. She meets a friend who helps her try to clean up this mess, but her will starts to leave. Aluna is then left with two choices: to turn things right and be confident in her sanity or truly go mad and send her life collapsing.
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