Fate Intertwined?

ABOUT THE STORY:
This is an Indian BL, BL as in BOYS LOVE. SO HOMOPHOBES, PLEASE GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE. Also, this story is from South India, Andhra Pradesh. So a few Telugu words will be used here and there and their meanings will also be provided. This is a love story between University boys, got inspired by the bromances Indian boys have but seriously, I do envy the pure friendship Indian boys have....There will be a few grammatical errors here and there so please forgive me!
STORY LINE: Ajith met Subash at his little sister Priya's birthday party. Priya invited her newly made best friend, Sahiti and her brother Subash to the party. Subash, at the party, while hovering near her sister, Noticed Ajith's constant staring and assumed that Ajith was trying to hit on his sister, but plot twist, Ajith was actually hitting on him the whole time?! And why does Ajith feel familiar..??

AUTHOR'S NOTE! : Guys, I need comments, a lot of snarky ones! And this book is technically my first one, so I would appreciate all the aspects I could get to improve my book. Thank you! And Happy Reading!!