Raqs e Dil
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Alana Malik
I loved him even before I knew the meaning of the word love.
But realizing that the man I have loved my whole life is in love with Noor...
Maybe I would have killed Noor if she were some other girl.
But the girl my love, my bakht, is in love with is none other than Noor Dawood Malik-my brother's wife-who is dealing with consecutive delays and behaves like a child.
Only Allah knows how brutally my heart broke hearing his confession for Noor in front of my family.
Bakhtiyar bin Taha
I know I sinned by falling for my brother's wife.
But what hurts more is the realization that Alana loves me.
And I don't know what to do now, because to me she is the daughter of the man who ruined my Tani phupho.
I hate her bold behavior.
I hate the mere thought that her veins carry Theodore's blood, and yet my family treats her like she is some princess.
For her, he is the love of her life, and she fell in love with him since childhood-without knowing the reality of him being the illegitimate son of the man who tried to rape her phupho.
For him, she is just the bold, noisy flesh of the man who ruined his Tani phupho.
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