The Girl In The River
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It was initially supposed to be some sort of prank, more like curiosity.
"You never changed, it's always been the same, you and i, always two peas in a pod, we could've never changed anything, had it not been for Her. She changed everything. Once..."
"...Once She found us, we became more..."
She looked to the boy sitting beside her, lost in her words.
"i could've sworn it was nothing biased about it, it was simple, we made a mistake and we payed the right respects toward it" the boy looked towards the girl, she looked scared, as if something, or someone, might emerge from within the trunk they had stuffed in the back.
"since then... we've sworn to all our friends and family-"
"right after we did what was necessary..."
"- that we'd do no such thing as long as we live-"
"we even signed a contract-"
suddenly, as if the boy was possessed, the boy looked at the girl in a fit of rage, screaming at the top of his lungs.
"I GAVE TO YOU!! I LIED FOR YOU!! I SACRIFICED FOR YOU!! AND THIS IS HOW YOU REPAY ME, HOW YOU GIVE BACK??!!"
the boy deflated, fell down limp by the girls feet as the girl screamed, and screamed, and screamed...
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