Broken
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Last published Tue, May 26, 2015
I don't really know what this story is going to be about yet. I just sat down and started writing and, well, I guess what I have so far is the result of that! What I'm really wanting is for people to read my story (what I have so far, anyway) and give me feedback, ideas, comments, and (constructive) criticism. Thank you! Enjoy!
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