MY IMMORTAL (RETAKE)
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Last published Mon, Feb 23, 2026
Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way is a 17-year-old student attending the prestigious, yet quite isolated academy called R.A.F.A. (Redwood Academy of Fine Arts) in nowhere, Kansas.
During her school days, she studies magic, enduring torment from students from other camps, writing in her journal and getting involved in some mysteries surrounding her school and the people associated with it.
This story is my retake of the less than stellar "My Immortal" written by Tara Gilesbie under the username "XXXbloodyrists666XXX".
This year (2026 as of writing) is its 20th anniversary and I wanted to take a crack at rewriting it.
Feel free to leave your honest thoughts down below, I'm open to criticism.
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