The Very Steps Of Hell

"At about seven o'clock the cell doors were locked on the outside..." (Just a quick note to say that this is my first short story I've ever written on Watt pad so it could be drastically bad. Also, I wrote this in an hour and the only reason I'm saying this is because there could be a bunch of mistakes in it so I'm very sorry. The reason why I'm not proof -reading is because I genuinely want to see what people honestly think of my writing. Please be honest- if you don't like it tell me but be mature, I need constructive criticism. Sorry this is so long, so onwards we go! Plus I wasn't entirely sure what category it falls under so sorry about that too!)