The Version After || Chapter 2
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One seizure leaves Josh fighting for his life, and the doctors had no choice but to place him in an induced coma.
Now the hospital becomes home.
Machines breathe for him. Time drags in slow, unbearable hours. Luke and Mason refuse to leave his side, living off hospital coffee and false hope, while every day feels like it could be the day they lose their brother.
But even if Josh opens his eyes... nothing will be the same.
Because the scariest question isn't if Josh will wake up.
It's who he'll be when he does.
His epilepsy may worsen?
The seizure wasn't just a close call - it was a warning. And if Josh wakes up, it won't be to a life that's normal, easy, or safe. It'll be to a body that doesn't listen anymore, a brain that can continue to betray him without warning.
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