Only Daddy Saw Him
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Last published Fri, May 15, 2026
A man named Alex was seen the night a brother died. No one saw him except their bedridden father.
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Five brothers live under the same roof of their father's estate, bound by strong brotherhood, wealth, and their own rules since childhood. But one night, something happens that none of them expected.
The fifth brother, who is supposed to live, is suddenly found dead in the family pool. The death should have been impossible because the four brothers themselves had agreed that nothing would happen to him. Yet the body in the pool says otherwise.
The eldest brother, a CID investigator, Archibald Koomson, begins searching for answers. As he looks deeper into the events surrounding the death, one name keeps appearing, Alex. A man he believes is connected to what happened that night. But no one has ever seen Alex except their bedridden father. As the investigation dives deeper, the detective becomes more confused: Because if the dead brother was meant to live, then one of his brothers broke the agreement. And if only Daddy saw Alex.
Then how is he connected to his brother's death?
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