Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney (Ariana Terran fanfic) {On Hold}

This is my first story. It follows the plot of the game, but changes as well. A new character is introduced: Ariana Terran. It reads a bit like how it should feel if you play the game. I think you should just read it for yourself so you can judge for yourself.
I would really appreciate comments to know what you think of it.