Playing the Antagonist
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"No man chooses evil because it is evil; he only mistakes it for happiness, the good he seeks." —Mary Wollstonecraft
The Divergent and Insurgent novels from the eyes of a loathed antagonist; follow the story through the eyes of Eric, a cold and calculated leader of the Dauntless faction. Impressionable youth, bent morals, and impossible self-standards - look at the quietly hostile soul from a different set of lenses. After reading the novels a plethora of times and marking off Eric's parts in the series, I find it's time to entertain the masses with my take on his character.
I will update as frequently as I can, now, shall we entertain these ideas together?
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