Toto
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When not dodging motogangs, sleeping in class, or avoiding his mean Aunt, Toto is a teenager without direction, hoping only for a quiet job after high school and for the world to leave him alone. But before he's pushed into the adulthood he's trying to avoid the unthinkable happens and his whole world turns upside down. Framed for a bombing he didn't commit, Toto must uncover the truth before the world comes crashing down on his head. Forced outside the city and into the Wastelands, his face is on every billboard and vidfeed in the city. With the government cracking down on one end and a rebellion brewing on the other, Toto must carefully thread the line between the two groups...or else get sucked down in the spiral of violence and lose everything. NOTE: This is just a rough draft of a piece I'm working on. Wattpad is a wonderful way to support a burgeoning writing habit, which is what I'm doing. PLEASE comment on what you like, don't like, think I did well or poorly. It's all to be a better writer! After I finish up to a certain point I will be doing a large rewrite and edit, so your voice matters!
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Imagine living in a city that does not allow you to leave at all, exploits you as a person, student, and worker from the day you are born, determines and assigns the "perfect" job for you before you are born, does not allow you any personal freedoms (unless it is alone in your bedroom or bathroom with caution). It will torture or execute, depending on the status or identity of the person, if any law is broken no matter how small or big the law is. That's the city of Dimwar. Tall, thick concrete walls around its borders prevent anyone and everyone from leaving the city- anyone who tries will be searched, chased down, and executed. One teen girl, Taylor Kensley, begins a revolution to change this and fight for the trapped, oppressed people of the city. Will she succeed-- and how long will it take? WHAT will it take? And what will she have to lose to get there? **WARNING: Contains mature scenes with mentions of physical abuse, emotional abuse, domestic violence, self-harm, suicide, murder, and bigotry. Please read at your own risk or skip if you are sensitive to these topics!

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