Deficient
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Moebius 2157 | ONC2019 Short List [Complete] by taivaan_sininen
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Special Agent Alyssa Caine has been tasked with the most important mission of her life: the assassination of the man who would bring about the end of the world. The only problem? He is already dead. A minor issue that is resolved in the year 2157 when a renegade group of scientists develops a device that allows to jump through time. They recruit the former special agent to send her back fifty years, to take just one man out of the equation, a minimal change with a predicted maximal effect on the fate of the world, and prevent a devastating war that has driven the last surviving humans to live in decrepit underground bunkers. Every action has a consequence. Alyssa is humanity's last hope, and her actions will determine the fate of the whole world. She is willing to sacrifice everything for a better future. But she soon realizes that the impact of her actions might be beyond her control, and beyond all predictions. _____ Highest Rankings: #16 in Science [06.02.2019] #36 in Dystopia [06.02.2019] #65 in FemaleProtagonist [01.02.2019] #71 in TimeTravel [06.02.2019] #1 in Paradox [28.02.2019] #1 in ONC2019 [01.02.2019] #3 in OpenNovellaContest2019 [28.02.2019] This is my entry for the ONC 2019! At first I thought I'd pick something a bit out of my comfort zone (so.... NOT SciFi for once...) to expand my horizon, but when I saw a prompt about time travel I was immediately inspired. Please keep in mind, all of this is WIP! The title, cover, and some of the content might change at any time... I have an outline and I worked hard to come up with a compelling and consistent story line, but due to the nature of the story (timey whimey stuff!) I might have to revise things a few times as I write. I'm grateful for any feedback and I hope you enjoy :)
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40 parts Complete Mature
I've never been able to taste fear before, but I do now, it lingers in the air. Like a flame. Kindled by the president, fed by the citizens, and I'm the one who has to put it out. The extinguisher? Possibly my life. ꧁ .・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・. ꧂ In a world where expressing emotions are illegal and can lead to execution, everything seems perfect. All the countries and their citizens are efficient, orderly and obedient, and nobody seems to question the rules. But Ada Alexander struggles to keep her emotions hidden and she discovers more and more feelings that most humans have forgotten long ago, love, grief, anger, pain and fear. When the system glitches and she is able to cry for the first time ever, she feels tricked and robbed by the government, becomes inspired and develops a revolutionary plan to break the system so people can feel once again, and her family worries for her life. But will her death and discoveries be worth it? 𝙄𝙣 π™¬π™π™žπ™˜π™ 𝙖 π™©π™šπ™šπ™£ π™›π™žπ™œπ™π™©π™¨ 𝙛𝙀𝙧 π™π™šπ™§ 𝙛π™ͺ𝙩π™ͺπ™§π™š π™œπ™šπ™£π™šπ™§π™–π™©π™žπ™€π™£'𝙨 π™§π™žπ™œπ™π™© 𝙩𝙀 π™šπ™’π™€π™©π™žπ™€π™£π™¨ π™žπ™£ 𝙖 π™—π™§π™€π™ π™šπ™£ 𝙬𝙀𝙧𝙑𝙙. Highest rank achieved: #3 in #dystopianfuture Warning: Suicide, violence, gore, self-harm and mature language. I will be publishing many chapters, each chapter has three parts, all published separately at different times. If you have any feedback, please feel free to share it with me, I love feedback! β™‘ Cover by: @rose_anselina Tysm Lea, go check out her cover shop please! [Completed] Word count: 50146 Words Original Fictional Novel Β© walkeralyssayeohxoxo | 2021 Β© All Rights Reserved Started - 25th November 2020 Finished - 26th April 2021
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The story of Ancient versus Modern. In a seemingly prefect world controlled by 'The Corporation', a soldier can see past the blinding lights and propaganda of their fast-paced world. Is there an anwer to the question they all want to know-Why do we let them control us, how did we come to this?