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CHILDREN OF THE PIT.
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Ongoing, First published Jun 02, 2015
"The children of the pit" is a short fiction that illustrates the austerities of lives of people of a land that sits on a precious mineral, gold but trapped in abject poverty. 
kobe, a young boy from the village narrates his story of how hopelessness got him inside a pit. a pit of children of his own kind and how and world ended for him inside there.

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