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El Paso
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Fiction
Romance
Tragedy
Small town
Suspense
Love, lust, and youth - what a story to tell. Letters have been written, whirls have been danced, and love has sparked in the heart of a man - love that she does not return. A moment of violence between her lover and the man who wants her that changes everything. A crime that catches up to him. Isn't love such a dangerous thing? Based on the song 'El Paso' by Marty Robbins. I also wanted to be clear that this isn't from my perspective, this is from the character's perspective. I think that was evident, but it was bothering me, so I'm going to close that thread whilst I'm thinking about it.
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