The Girl Only Seen In Storms [COMPLETE]

The Girl Only Seen In Storms [COMPLETE]

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in which a girl who is only seen in storms learns. electric was in the air. a storm rolled in. drops of rain greeted the car. the world seemed to stop. no one was on the roads. a flash, a spark. the early morning sky woke up. the first lightning strike. a sigh, the parting of lips. police cars with flashing lights. bitter air. breathless laughs. the smell of cigarettes and gasoline. a postal office. so many smiles. the blink of an eye. puffy clouds. teary eyes. attic windows. whispers under shooting stars. and the world just kept turning. Currently editing, because this book is awfully written! it was published in 2015, and I like to think my writing has improved! it won't be that drastic, just less cringey! stay tuned :)
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On a rainy afternoon, two friends seek shelter together, their clothes drenched from the storm. As they dry off, unspoken tension builds between them. The protagonist finds themselves drawn to the other's beauty, their heart racing with emotions they never acknowledged before. A simple moment-brushing hair, a lingering touch-leads to a kiss, then something deeper, something intimate and electric. Their bodies speak in ways words never could, lost in the warmth of each other. But when the rain stops, so does the illusion. The moment shatters when one pulls away, apologizing-revealing that, despite everything they shared, they don't see the protagonist that way. Left alone, heartbroken, the protagonist is left to wrestle with the contradiction of feeling everything just moments before, only to lose it all in the silence that follows.

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