The Controlling (UPDATED, NEW STORYLINE!!)
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The Controlling is finally back!!
After almost 7-8 years, I've completely rewritten this story from the ground up. The characters, plot, world-building, and writing have all been reimagined to create the story I always wanted to tell.
If you read the original years ago, expect something entirely new. This isn't just an edit. It's a fresh beginning. :)
Thank you for giving The Controlling another chance. I hope you'll fall in love with this new version just as much as I have. 🫶
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Rachid Gueye de son vrai nom Hassan Tidiane Ba. À 8 ans, ses parents sont assassinés. Sa tante l'accueille, mais son mari le chasse trois jours après. Rachid va alors à l'orphelinat. Le lendemain, un homme d'affaires riche nommé Bachir Gueye l'adopte. Il lui donne son nom et change son prénom. Rachid devient le grand frère d'Issa et Sofia, les enfants de Bachir. 30 ans plus tard, Rachid est devenu un homme riche, puissant, strict et arrogant. Sa famille gère des entreprises légales, mais aussi la plus grande mafia sénégalaise. Rachid n'a jamais été amoureux. Pour lui, les femmes servent juste pour le plaisir et il n'en veut pas dans sa vie. Dans un monde parallèle, vit une villageoise de 19 ans nommée Zahra Sarr. Elle a perdu sa mère. C'est un garçon manqué, insolent et bagarreuse . Elle porte des vêtements trop grands et n'a peur de personne. À cause de son comportement, les villageois se plaignent souvent d'elle. Son père, Massamba, la bat et la maltraite à chaque fois. Zahra supporte tout par amour pour sa tante et son petit frère malade, Abdourakhmane. Un jour, tout bascule. Son meilleur ami, dont elle est amoureuse, se fiance avec une autre fille. En plus, Zahra découvre un lourd secret sur elle-même. Elle décide alors de quitter le village pour aller en ville chez son oncle. Son but est de continuer ses études et de mener l'enquête pour découvrir la vérité. Zahra et Rachid sont obligés de vivre ensemble, car Zahra est la nièce de Bachir Gueye. Dès son arrivée, la maison devient un terrain d'affrontement psychologique entre Rachid et Zahra. Tous les deux ont des blessures du passé et mènent chacun une enquête de leur côté. Rachid cherche le meurtrier de ses parents pour se venger. Zahra, elle, cherche à découvrir l'identité de son vrai père. Dans la famille Gueye, tout le monde est un peu fou et de très lourds secrets vont bientôt éclater.
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