Six Silk Ribbons

Just a story I wrote for class about a week ago, its also my very first attempt at writing a horror story. I would love to get some reviews or constructive criticism. The assignment was to write a scene from a book we planned out, so I just wrote the very beginning of it so it would make sense. Anyway hope you enjoy! (note: I know I kind of took somethings from Corpse Party, like the building, but I tried to make it different)