Up In Flames

Up In Flames

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Science Fiction
A famous inventor has the delusional idea of opening up different dimensions to solve the earth's population problems. His idea ends up to be a step towards doom as the dimension he discovers and opens, releases demons. The only transportation available to escape earth is a space ship named Fiberdale. Laurel Chipperston, a passenger on Fiberdale, finds herself in hot water after the death of her teacher. Just when she thinks she's lost it all, she gets a dangerous offer from the president. Laurel can get released from jail- but only with the fulfillment of one ghastly condition.
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Kayla Madison is a normal-ish sixteen-year old whose main desire is simple-make it through high school without embarrassing herself too much in the process. It doesn't help that she's being followed by dark figures no one else sees. When a man with incredible speed, unbelievable power, strange old-fashion clothes, and an obnoxious personality threatens her life, she discovers she is a rare "two-worlder" -a person with one parent from Earth and the other from Earth Prime. She escapes another attack by jumping through a portal to the alternate dimension, much to the chagrin of her protector. As if managing without electricity, cars, and phones on the more Edwardian world weren't enough stress; she finally meets her long-absent father, a scientist in the top-secret field of Trans-Dimensional Travel. Things get more complicated when she realizes her best friend's father, or rather the Earth Prime version of him, might have been the person that orchestrated the assaults. ___ Thanks for reading! I've been working on this story for quite a while and have drafts for a five book series. I would love feedback on what I can do to make it a stronger story. If there are things you enjoy, let me know (so I don't change those parts.) :) All portions of the story have been submitted and final chapters will visible by Nov 18, 2023. Among other degrees, I have my MFA in creative writing. I am a science teacher when I am not writing.

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