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သည်ဇာတ်လမ်းထဲက ဇာတ်လမ်း ဇာတ်ကွက်များသည် စာရေးသူ၏စိတ်ကူးသက်သက်သာ ဖြစ်ပါသည်၊ 🔞အခန်းတွေအများကြီးပါတာမို့, အမှောင်မကြိုက်ရင် မဖတ်ဖို့အကြုံပြုပါရစေ အချစ်ဆိုတာ လူသတ်ရတာလောက် ရင်ခုန်စရာမကောင်ဘူး ရာရာ ကိုယ့်အတွက် အချစ်ဆိုတာ ကစားစရာထက်မပိုဘူး၊ ဂျိမ်းစ့်ကင်မရွန်း အယုတ်တမာ ကောက်ကျစ်ဥာဏ်နီဥာဏ်နက်များတယ် ကျွဲအိုကြီး ဆာကူရာ State Date_11....4..2023 Complete Date_28...2...2025
🌸 အညာမြေမှ ချစ်တေးတစ်ပုဒ်🌸
တောရွာဇာတ်လမ်းမလို ကြိုက်နှစ်သက်ရင်ဖတ်ရှု့နိုင်ပါတယ်။ "မင်းအတွက် အမှတ်တမဲ့ဆိုပေမဲ့ ကိုယ့်အတွက်တော့ ထာဝရပါ အချစ်ရယ့်၊ မချစ်မှန်းလဲ သိပါရက်နဲ့ ကိုယ့်ဟာ....မင်းနဲ့ပတ်သက်လာရင်၊ သေးသေးလေးကအစ ဂရုစိုက်မိတယ် ကောင်မို့, မင်းမုန်းလဲ ကိုယ်ခံပါမယ်၊ ကိုယ့်ကိုယ် မထားခဲ့ပါနဲ့လား နွယ်ရယ်" ဥာဏ်ဇေယျာကို State Date_8..Jan..2026 Complete Date_2...April...2026
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රුධිරයෙන් ලියවුණු අතීතයක්... නමුත්, ඔහුට ඒ කිසිවක් මතක නැත. නමුත් අතීතය ඔහුව අමතක කර නැත. ඔහ ුට අමතක වූ පොරොන්දුවක් වෙනුවෙන්, වසර ගණනක් බලා සිටි කෙනෙක් ඇත. ඔහුට අමතක වූ ආදරයක් වෙනුවෙන්, තවමත් ජීවත් වන කෙනෙක් ඇත. ඒත් ඔවුන්ගේ කතාව ආරම්භ වූයේ, ආදරයෙන්ද... නැතිනම් රුධිරයෙන්ද? සමහර මතක අමතක කළ හැකිය. නමුත් සමහර සත්යයන්ට ඔබ කොතරම් දුර දිව්වත්- ඔබව සොයාගෙන එන්න පුළුවන්...
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මට ඕනේ හැමදාම නුඹෙ තුරුළටම වී ඉන්න... #3 bl #3 nonfiction #2 sinhala #1 sinhalabl #1 srilanka #1 roses #1 emotional #1 marshmallows #1 feelings #1 nonfic #1 nonfanfiction #1 nonff #1 nonfanfic #24 love #4 gay #3 reallife 2023.12.09 2024.06.08 Cover credit goes to :-Concluída
Love's Unforseen Turn ~metanoia✨(Editing)
Let's dive into a new romance saga ✿ 𝐌𝐄𝐄𝐓 𝐎𝐔𝐑 𝐌𝐀𝐋𝐄 𝐏𝐑𝐎𝐓𝐀𝐆𝐎𝐍𝐈𝐒𝐓 ✿ 𓆩 𝐀𝐁𝐇𝐈𝐌𝐀𝐍𝐘𝐔 𝐑𝐀𝐓𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄 𓆪 Just like his name-fearless, fierce, and impossible to ignore. A 30-year-old dangerously handsome CEO and the reigning king of Rajasthan, life's cruel twists have transformed him from an ordinary boy into an arrogant, egoistic man who trusts no one. Love? That's a luxury he believes he can't afford-or even feel. But destiny has other plans. She enters his life like a storm wrapped in sunshine, and nothing stays the same. "He saw her before he saw anything else in the room." ♡ "He fell first. And even harder." ✿ 𝐌𝐄𝐄𝐓 𝐎𝐔𝐑 𝐅𝐄𝐌𝐀𝐋𝐄 𝐏𝐑𝐎𝐓𝐀𝐆𝐎𝐍𝐈𝐒𝐓 ✿ ✧ 𝐀𝐀𝐑𝐔𝐒𝐇𝐈 𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐑𝐌𝐀 ✧ Just like her name-symbolizing the first ray of morning sunlight-she represents hope, warmth, and a fresh beginning. A 22-year-old spirited teacher, Aarushi is beloved by her family. She doesn't only crave love; she desires respect, maturity, and peace in a relationship. However, her simple dreams are soon entangled in a fate that brings her face-to-face with a past her family tried to leave behind. "Why him? Because even after my mood swings, unreasonable demands, and late-night meltdowns..he never gave up on me." ༶•┈ 𝐓𝐇𝐄𝐈𝐑 𝐒𝐓𝐎𝐑𝐘 𝐁𝐄𝐆𝐈𝐍𝐒 ┈•༶ What starts with silence, hatred, and an unwanted marriage slowly unfolds into a story filled with: ➺ Tension, healing, longing, and trust. ➺ Cute fights, jealous glances, stolen moments, and soft confessions. But between the chaos and calm, the pain and peace-will love be enough? ☾ 𝐓𝐀𝐆𝐒 ☽ #Grumpy×Sunshine #AgeGap #WhippedML #DesiRomance #ForcedMarriage #LoveHate #PossessiveML
THE WEDDING 18+ / Yizhan 💍♥️🫦( Completed )
"ඔයා මගේ ජීවිතේට ආපු මොහොතේම... ඔයාගේ නිදහසත් මට අයිති උනා." (:හිලෑ නැ පොඩ්ඩක්වත්:)Concluída
وألتقيـــتُ بـــنصــفـــي الآخــــر.
الـروايـة جـزئـان بينــما كانــت تهـــرول بيــن الــطُرق التـــي يســـودها الظــلام الدامــس... أنتشلتــها يــدًا دفئــها يُذكرهـــا بــ والدها... أنتشلتــها إلــى النــور...بعــد أن عاشــت فــي ذلــك الــظلام مُــدة جعلت آمالــها تتـــبخر أن ترى الــنور مرة أُخرى...!! وبينمــا كـــان قلبــها يبحــث عن طــوق نجاتــه..! وجـــد نصفــه الآخر الــذي كـــان ييحــث عنــه هــو الآخــر دون درايـــة صاحبِــه...!!! فـــ مُنـــــذ وفـــاة أبيهــا...ولَــم يتبقــى لهــا أحد، أصبحت وحيــدة كــ غُصـــن وحيــد بــ شجــرة ســقطــت جميـــع أغصانـــها ولَــم يتبقــى بــها إلا غُصــن واحــد فقط، فـــ كانـــت جميــع الأشجـــار بــها غصــون تُســاند بعضــها البــعض، إلا تلــك الــشجـــرة التــي بهــا ذلـــك الــغُصن الوحيـــد.... الـــذي لَــم يــجد مـــا يُسانــده، فــ هو مُهلــك بِـــلا مَحالــة إن أتــت ريـــاح حتــى وإن كانـــت خفيــفة...!! وهى.... كانــت وحيــدة كـــالغُصـــن هـــذا تماماً. وبيــن ألـــم...و...خــــذلان...ألتقيـــتُ بـــنــصفـــي الآخــــر.......!!!!!
බඹරිඳුනේ / Bambaridune
"උබ ඕන එකක් කියපන්.....මං අහන්නෙ මට ඕන දේ විතරයි" අස්විධ සේනාධි "කතා කරන්නම ඕනද මාව තේරුම් ගන්න..." නෙවාන් වස්තුක වජ්රධර
သည်ဇာတ်လမ်းထဲက ဇာတ်လမ်း ဇာတ်ကွက်များသည် စာရေးသူ၏စိတ်ကူးသက်သက်သာ ဖြစ်ပါသည်၊ 🔞အခန်းတွေအများကြီးပါတာမို့, အမှောင်မကြိုက်ရင် မဖတ်ဖို့အကြုံပြုပါရစေ အချစ်ဆိုတာ လူသတ်ရတာလောက ် ရင်ခုန်စရာမကောင်ဘူး ရာရာ ကိုယ့်အတွက် အချစ်ဆိုတာ ကစားစရာထက်မပိုဘူး၊ ဂျိမ်းစ့်ကင်မရွန်း အယုတ်တမာ ကောက်ကျစ်ဥာဏ်နီဥာဏ်နက်များတယ် ကျွဲအိုကြီး ဆာကူရာ State Date_11....4..2023 Complete Date_28...2...2025
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