Hope Betrayed

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The future scares like the past condemns.
Science is the new religion and being is
perhaps just the beginning.

Where once trees towered over grass, buildings now reign over kingdoms of tarmac and concrete. The world is drowning in the weight of its over population and all borders have been shut. In a world where the existence of nature is a fairy tale and humanity is on the brink of becoming a myth, is there hope of escaping a suffocating society? Sixteen-year old Ave and three of her friends attempt to escape the UK under the illusion of hope for a better life, fueled by the spirit of Finley, one of their best friends, who is driven by his will to survive.
After trials and tribulations their story comes to a devastating conclusion…