Torn Apart
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Last published Sat, Nov 5, 2016
He referenced the note. "Maybe that means we're finally going to get some information."
"I don't know," Lily shrugged. "They haven't done anything to me personally, just to people that-" She stopped talking.
"To people that what?"
Lily swallowed, "to people that I love."
Lily Hernandez is an orphan.
Her parents were brutally murdered in her own home when she was just eight years old. Now, several years later, she discovers an Uncle just two provinces away from her. She ran away from her foster family, and started a new life in the city of Drumheller, Alberta. She grew up, made some friends, and lived her life as she had always dreamed of doing.
But something's wrong.
Lily begins receiving notes, threatening messages. She realizes that she needs to uncover the truth about her parents' murder, before everyone that she loves, dies. Little does she know how much danger she's truly in, and how complex the system really is.
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