A little help needed
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hey guys!!!So, i wrote this essay for a freaking competition and didn't get selected.I mean like you can't blame me the topic was birds anyway i tried my best and was really disappointed when it didn't work out.So, basically i'm sitting here thinking that i'm a shit writer or maybe it was judged on the wrong lines so i would need a little help here.I know that wattpad has able writers who can tell me how my essay was, getting honest comments would mean alot to me.
So, whoever reads it thank you so much you're doing me a great favour <3 <3 <3
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