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Ongoing, First published Jun 12, 2015
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"How are you?"

I hear this question nearly every day of my existence. I always answer the same way. "I'm fine." But really? I'm just a sad girl with a happy face. And no one wants to hear about my problems; so I leave them unspoken.

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Meet Acacia Radley, an average 16 year old hopelessly in love with a boy who doesn't feel the same. Everything changes when Acacia's love rival is killed. She finally has a chance. But she soon realizes that Zach, her crush, isn't the same person he used to be. Acacia decides to help Zach find out who and what happened to his girlfriend. 

I try to update as often as possible, some of the major concepts are still being created. I really connect with Acacia, and her voice is really mine. So, theoretically, this is a pretty accurate representation of the teenage mind. But none the less, please try it out. I'm 99.9% sure you'll like it (100% really, but there's always that 0.01% you gotta watch out for...) I suck at these kind of things, so, hopefully, I'll see you soon.

Enjoy <3

Warning: May contain cursing
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Fly Away (OLD VERSION)

42 parts Complete

An idea popped into my somewhat witty brain. "Ooh, can I call you 'Mophead', since that's what your hair looks like?" He laughed. The way his eyes lit up and the melodic ring of his voice was so freaking hot. He flicked his head to the side in an attempt to get his hair out of his face... Zack's voice snapped me out of my hopeless swooning. "No, but you can call me anytime," he replied with a flirtatious wink. ~~~ Sixteen year old Raven Westfield is searching for a fresh start after a horrible accident that ruined her life. She desperately needs to be in a new place, where nobody knows of her dark past of a ruined reputation, lies, and betrayal, so she leaves everything behind to start over in a new state. Zachary Anderson is the untouchable Golden Boy of Rosewood High School. With his charming looks and genius brain, all the girls want to be with him and all the guys want to be him. But what they don't know is that Zack isn't as perfect as everyone thinks. Through a whirlwind of secrets, love, memories, and friendship, the two discover their pasts are more similar than they realize. What happens when two broken people come together? Do their missing puzzle pieces match... or cause a mess? Started: June 2018 Finished: April 21, 2020 Cover by: ucancallmerose *Cliche-ish warning* **TW: Includes strong language and flashbacks involving abuse/self harm/suicide***

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