Test Scene
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Last published Sat, Jun 13, 2015
This is just a scene from a book that I am attempting to write at this moment in time. You may think you can guess what's it is about but it's very different. Please leave your opinions and how it could be improved. I wanted to make it different and enjoy writing in 2nd person because I think that makes it look more personal.
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