Angel Beats: The Alternative Ending

Heyo! Ha, my first story! I thought I would start off with something simple. I will be trying to publish a new chapter at least once or twice a day. Any type of criticism would be greatly appreciated. I must learn from my mistakes.
If it isn't obvious, this story is NOT canon. This is completely fan made and original.
Also, this story is full of spoilers so if you haven't already finished Angel Beats, I suggest you do so or there may be some confusion.. And it's just a good anime in general :3
Quick note, chapter 1 takes place after Yuri and the others disappear.
All characters belong P.A works.
Other than that, I hope you enjoy!~ Jon