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Chloe Provan wakes up in a white padded room with no memory as of to how she's arrived here. Chains bind her to the wall, and from the looks of it, there's no way out. She fills out forms, is given an ear piece, and then assigned to a house where she finds four other teenagers claiming to be her family. Now, Chloe must prove herself perfect or die trying.
Rule 1: do whatever he says
Rule 2: trust and love your new family
Rule 3: don't piss him off
Current Rank: #30 in Science Fiction
Best Rank: #3 in Science Fiction
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