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Complete, First published Jun 16, 2015
I am currently in a creative writing program at my local college. We were given a challenge, this was not due for class however. We were challenged to write a story in the same amount of character as twitter allots, which is 180. I may have went over the limit by only a few characters. I am a new writer although I extremely love doing it. Give me feedback on my piece, please and thank you!
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