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Harry Potter OC Critiques [PAUSED]
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Last published Tue, Jun 23, 2020
Armed with google and two years' worth of experience as a cringey fanfiction author and cringey OC creator, I'm here to review and (hopefully) help you improve your OCs so you don't spend as much time as I did wondering why nobody thinks your cool witch girl is as cool as you do.
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