ATTENTION: THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS STORY
Whew, got that off my chest. Yeah... I'm not that good at finishing or at finding time to do all my stuff so, if you dare to get invested in this story, bear in mind it probably won't finish and will be rewritten multiple times (haha it drives my co-writer insane)
I should stress that the sole reason this story is online is for your feedback. It's is your wise advice as seasoned readers to show me and my good writing friend how to write better, and what to change.
Before I let you loose into the world of Inkling, I will consider giving out material prizes to whoever can spot the change in waiting style from myself to Jaeger, or when we are writing at the same time at that point in the story.
So, thank you for reason this notice, so enjoy!
Noor, a dancer in the Royal Court of the Al-Yauzhan Empire wants nothing more than to pay off her debts and lead a nice, simple life-but a chance encounter with the crown prince and his brother brings her into the dangerous world of court politics. As Noor and the princes investigate their uncle and cousin's possible treason, she grows closer to the crown prince, but in order to save the kingdom and the person she loves, Noor will have to risk everything...
A romantic adventure set in an imagined Arabic kingdom, THE DANCING GIRL is a story of court intrigues, romantic entanglements, and secret meetings as Noor and her best friend Amir try to help the princes they're falling for expose corrupt court officials with plans to seize the throne. Noor and Amir are close to having everything they've ever dreamed of...now all they need to do is survive.