Maasai Love Affair (ON HOLD)

okay i'm thinking of writing an african love story, for a change. The characters and their plots goes as follows:
Asuminia: the main character, a very pretty girl but also a tomboy, who was good friends with Aluni, the chief's younger son. She was married off to the best warrior, the chief's elder son, Haki. Being a tomboy, Asuminia didn't want to get married. But her parents were poor, so she had to for their sake. But that didn't mean she had to be an obedient wife to Haki.
Haki: The best warrior, also the next in line to be the chief. He was in love with Kestina, Asuminia's elder sister. They both hated the village llife and had planned to escape to the city. Kestinia dumped him for an older man with access to the city. He married Asuminia to exact revenge on Kestina. He ended up falling for Asuminia.
Aluni: the chief's second and younger son. He was planning on making Asuminia his wife when he came to age but his brother beat him to it. He became angry with his brother and tried to get him killed countless of times, so he could claim the chiefdom as well as asuminia as his.
Kestina: Asuminia's elder sister, who married an older man to be able to leave the village and live in the city. Her husband had other plans. He wanted her to remain at the village to up keep his home, while he went travelling back and forth to the city. She kept countless of lovers, when her husband Pellu, was not there. She even tried getting Haki back countless of times but failed. She started hating her sister for being the reason Haki wouldn't go back to her and tried to ruin her reputation.
i'm thinking of giving POV's for all the above but mainly focusing on Asuminia. i dont know if yall will like it, but i'm hoping you'd love it and also i'm determined to do it...... :D
Atinayb out~