Story cover for Barely Visible by RiverWillow
Barely Visible
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    Time 35m
Ongoing, First published Feb 18, 2013
An ordinary girl, witness to many tragedies, sent off to a boarding school in England, she loses everyone, she starts to fade away.

I look down at my desk, why did they hate me? As if they couldn't see me. My hand twitched, I could feel it on the cold hard desk, but there was no hand there. If no one could see me why should I?

I spun around quick as I could. Was I imagining things? But I knew what I saw, flickers of some one flickers of hope. 

The story of 13 year old Esme Valdez, victim to the impossible.


A first story by RiverWillow and MoreThanUpsideDown.

(Cast is based on looks not on acting ability.)
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