The Poet's Last Words

The semi true story of a girl I knew whose family died in a car crash when she was in sixth grade. She asked me to write a short story of her life, so if you could read it for her, she would love it. I made a few of things up, but most of it is true. Since then, she has been diagnosed with a various of mental health issues that I try to address in this. Please uses as much criticism as possible, as I am trying to make it as good as possible for her.