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Athene is seventeen, Princess of Oseira, and knows exactly where her life is headed. She will take the throne, make alliances, and defend her mountain kingdom from all who would seek to conquer it - especially the lords of Lanosia, to the south, who would stop at nothing to gain the wealth that Oseira holds. But a surprise attack by a band of mercenaries leads to the murder of the Royal Counsel, the imprisonment of the royal family, and the seizing of the throne. Athe is forced to flee - not with her soldiers, but accompanied only by Aren, the heir to a Lanosian nobleman. And finding an army to help retake her kingdom is easier said than done, when Athe still doesn't know who hired the mercenaries, or who it is that will stop at nothing to have her dead. She's just got to hope it's not the very people she plans on seeking help from...
Noor, a dancer in the Royal Court of the Al-Yauzhan Empire wants nothing more than to pay off her debts and lead a nice, simple life-but a chance encounter with the crown prince and his brother brings her into the dangerous world of court politics. As Noor and the princes investigate their uncle and cousin's possible treason, she grows closer to the crown prince, but in order to save the kingdom and the person she loves, Noor will have to risk everything...
A romantic adventure set in an imagined Arabic kingdom, THE DANCING GIRL is a story of court intrigues, romantic entanglements, and secret meetings as Noor and her best friend Amir try to help the princes they're falling for expose corrupt court officials with plans to seize the throne. Noor and Amir are close to having everything they've ever dreamed of...now all they need to do is survive.