Teeth - (redraft)

This is my attempt to re-draft the story "Teeth", if you want to read the original version, it's still available and I'd appreciate the input of anyone patient enough to read both versions and tell me what they think.

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Joseph "Joe" Kent doesn't believe in the supernatural, never has. As far as he's concerned, blaming evil in the world on anything other than the people in it is at best delusional, at worst, the excuse of evil people trying to point the finger elsewhere. 'Devil made me do it' and all that, and the fact that his estranged mother fervently believes that blood sucking undead are behind much of the problems in the world, and he's even more prepared to dig in his heels. Especially when after managing to cut off contact for years, he wakes up with her, and a fellow believer, in his apartment, claiming that his One-Too-Many-Weekend with friends may have been something considerably more... dangerous.

He figures at first his worst problem is trying to find a new apartment he can afford to ditch his unwanted relatives again, but slowly is forced to realize that something has definitely changed, and that he's been drawn into a world with a lot more teeth than he's used to, and must find out how to navigate before something takes a permanent bite out of him.