The Commander
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Ongoing, First published Jun 22, 2015
Mature
There's more than meets the eye when it comes to our night sky. Each constellation holds plants that hold life, each of those kingdoms are held to a higher up where they have god like powers that come from the stars. One being ruled by the young and reckless Juniper. Though he goes by Jung, his one and only priority is the safety of his people. Now an old enemy has threatened the system of Ophiuchus. 

Meanwhile, Acelynn is an 19 year old girl who's trying to pay for school by starring in a movie about teenage gods In Tokyo Japan. Although the part she plays isn't so far from the truth. She's the daughter of two extremely powerful people and has the power to command an army made of ashes. Though she was banished from the realm at the age of 14, she's still pulled in their direction and she can feel something bad is happening.  

Acelynn and Jung expectedly meet and he takes her to his world where she is forced to help them out and find the power she once had.  So they go off into worlds to help the kingdoms in need to ward off the new but too familiar enemies. Feelings develop and tensions get high, maybe high enough so she can't complete her mission. 

This is book one.
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