The Commander
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There's more than meets the eye when it comes to our night sky. Each constellation holds plants that hold life, each of those kingdoms are held to a higher up where they have god like powers that come from the stars. One being ruled by the young and reckless Juniper. Though he goes by Jung, his one and only priority is the safety of his people. Now an old enemy has threatened the system of Ophiuchus. Meanwhile, Acelynn is an 19 year old girl who's trying to pay for school by starring in a movie about teenage gods In Tokyo Japan. Although the part she plays isn't so far from the truth. She's the daughter of two extremely powerful people and has the power to command an army made of ashes. Though she was banished from the realm at the age of 14, she's still pulled in their direction and she can feel something bad is happening. Acelynn and Jung expectedly meet and he takes her to his world where she is forced to help them out and find the power she once had. So they go off into worlds to help the kingdoms in need to ward off the new but too familiar enemies. Feelings develop and tensions get high, maybe high enough so she can't complete her mission. This is book one.
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Long ago, humans with supernatural abilities began to appear in our world. These gifted humans possessed strange powers such as super strength, the ability to fly, or control over elements. However, these gifted humans were few in number. Soon, the normal humans grew jealous of their power. They shamelessly threw these "freaks" out of their homes. They were beaten, abused, and treated as slaves. Eventually, the gifted humans rebelled, and a great war began between them. This war would last for years and lead to countless lives lost. Realizing they could never coexist, the gifted humans decided to create a world where they could live freely. This world became known as Trabachi. Hundreds of years later, enter our main character. Luke Sky lives on Earth, where people had long forgotten about the great war and gifted humans. He receives a letter inviting him to Trabachi. There he discovers that what he once thought was impossible was actually possible. He finds out that not only does he have awesome super powers, but he is the chosen hero the entire kingdom has been waiting for. For not every Trabacian has forgiven the humans for what they did to their ancestors. And they are ready to take revenge on them all. -------------------------------------------------- Update! This book is now a published work! You can buy it on Amazon here: http://www.amazon.com/Legend-Godkids-Zachary-Paquette/dp/1522991042/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1452555883&sr=8-1&keywords=legend+of+the+godkids It would be awesome if you checked it out! This version has more content so if you want to see more of Luke and the gang, buy the book! Thanks again! Happy Reading! -Zachary Paquette

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