Downworld Visit
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Kelsey and her friends were in the middle of a normal school day when a strange lady shows up and takes all the kids to a cave. Up to Kelsey and a group of kids, who all have strange gifts, to save their class mates.
Okay so its not finished, but my friend and I are writing it and we thought it would be interesting to get some feedback. There are no chapters and not a lot of detail yet but we thought this would be fun to try. Please tell us what you think and what needs improvement. Thanks!
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