She Loves Him, She Loves Him Not

I wrote this 10 years ago when I was in high school. Just wanted to see what kind of feedback it receives.
Annalee Michaelson manages to turn her personal life into mass chaos during her senior year of college. She runs into Connor McAlister, a guy she knows from back home, at a party. They begin casually dating which soon turns into a serious relationship. Meanwhile she starts e-mailing and chatting with an old childhood friend, Jackson Tucker, who is serving in Iraq. When Jackson returns from Iraq, Annalee realizes the mess she has created. They both love her, and she has a choice to make. Her choice would easily be Jackson, but her mother, Mary Lynn Michaelson, insists that Annalee marry Connor McAlister. Connor is a law student with a trust fund, and the son of Mary Lynn's very best friend. When Mary Lynn realizes that Annalee's choice is Jackson, she attempts to remove Jackson from the picture for good. Will Annalee give up and marry Connor or will she fight for Jackson? The answer can be found on the last page of the book, but there are several pages to turn in between her first kiss with one and her last kiss with her final choice.