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Ongoing, First published Jun 25, 2015
It's the year 2020. Rapture has finally come to take back all the souls inhabiting Mother Earth. There has been a riff in the ties between a group known as the "All Knowing." This group consists of selected powers from both Heaven and Hell, which decides the fates of all those souls. They created a system where they go through your entire life, evaluating each second of what you have done, then deciding if you have been deemed saved or marked damned. In which, the souls would check in at the bottom of Rapture Hill, where they are given either a black ticket, for Hell, or a white ticket, for Heaven. 


Follow Lux on her journey to find her true rapture, changing her fate. She may loose people or she may gain some. Betrayal and deceit lead our Lux to do great things, in the darkest of places.
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