Calder Story

Calder Story

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Calder is a fifteen year old boy with a lot of daddy issues, after his father left him and his mother to go party in either Rio or Vegas, one of the two. Calder has absolutely no pent up anger at all. Whatsoever. No, I'm completely serious, he doesn't have any. Okay, maybe a little. Calder, along with his mother, and his adoptive brother, are the stars of this story which isn't a very professional tale, but hopefully an interesting one. This is an attempt at a story, my first real post on Wattpad. It's a slightly mature YA type novel, and I've attempted to give it a realistic but sarcastic feel. I'm only fourteen, so I know I'm not very good yet, but I hope you'll give it a try! It's short, and I may not finish this.... But I'd love some constructive criticism from people more qualified as writers than I, or even just avid readers. :3
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Written by Izen Torres January 7th 2003 - February 18th 2022 Rest in peace Won't lie. This story has a lot of plot holes. Like.... A LOT of plot holes. But I had the idea and my brain wouldn't leave me alone until I got it out. So here. Note: this story does have some sexual moments that involve minors. This is a story about a boy named Hazel who got kidnapped by his Uncle's ex-girlfriends brother. (Complicated. I know.) So what happened is a decade ago the Uncle raped the girlfriend and the girlfriend killed herself. The girlfriends younger brother Easton holds a grudge. Kidnaps 14 year old Hazel when he's on his way to visit the Uncle. But honestly it's mostly about Hazel being aware that he's being slowly stockholmed and trying to resist it. Tahdah. Also he loves his dad. Because I realized all my stories are about crappy or absent father's. (I don't have trauma. You do!)

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