Strangers On A Runway

Thinking about maybe re writing this one to add more depth. Not sure yet. So far I have four chapters written. Feedback is appreciated.

"Recently turned twenty one year old and community college graduate Spencer Holtz has been terrified of flying ever since he was a kid. So when his strict and religious single dad Harold, who owns a small hotel in Indiana, forces his shy and sheltered son to go to Las Vegas to see how the luxurious side of the hotel business works and enroll at the University for hotel management, Spencer becomes a nervous wreck.

Before boarding the plane he meets Victoria, a gorgeous and carefree nineteen year old with a bucket list and a wardrobe his father would never approve of. When she realizes this is Spenser's first time on a plane, she spontaneously decides to join him, and before long he finds himself more relaxed then he ever thought he could be. With Victoria at his side in Sin City, he discovers just how much he's let his father influence his life, and learns to become more willing to take risks and truly live his life the way he wants, while creating exciting memories with a girl he never imagined himself with. Unfortunately not all love stories have a happy ending. After an argument gets out of hand Victoria retreats back home. Unable to get the drifter girl out of his head, Spencer eventually overcomes his fear of flying and gets on a plane to find her, finally doing something for himself. However what he discovers is something he could have never prepared himself for."