Doing it Wrong
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Ongoing11m
Last published Sat, Apr 27, 2013
Hey! My name is Unique Maria Aniyah Velasquez and I am 14 years old. My dad, Alejandro Velasquez was the leader of the leader of the El Salvador Gang. That was until, he was brutally murdered in my 9th birthday. After his death, my mother, Melinda, went completely crazy. Because she was dangerously insane, me and my older brother, Enrique, were forced to live with my uncle Michael. He constantly rapes me but I'm too scared to tell anyone. Usually Enrique is here to protect me nd fight for me but lately he has been coming home late and going M.I.A for days at a time. I'm very worried about him, I mean it's not safe to be roaming the slums of Chicago at night.....our in the day time. Enrique is my protector and best friend, I love him and can't without him.
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